Thank you for acting out (…) in class yesterday! There are some great highlights, for example when Robert sang so beautifully and Malin and Josefin were two lions in love. Another instance is the serious acting done by Mohamed, Ari, Ernesto and Dardan.
Today I want you to:
1) read through my comments (in the entry below)
2) take a good look at your entry and correct at least 5 mistakes.
3) read each others’ entries and write positive comments to 3 of
them.
Klassföreståndare och mentor
Er klassföreståndare Anders (till höger)
Er mentor Carolina
HAHA, WE ARE THE BEST LIONS IN THE CLASS // MALIN & JOSEFIN
SvaraRaderaPicture 2
SvaraRaderaI want to live like this forever, free and with no demands however!
Hi guys! I just have to tell you that I’ve got the absolutely most boring, none interesting, name ever! My lovely parents made de awfully bad choice of giving me the name Carl. Seriously, why couldn’t they choose a name like Patric? But I can always change my name when I’m older, luckily. You know, I’ve just had my 13th birthday, and I’m so stupidly proud of not being a child anymore. Do you realize it? I’m a teenager for heavens sake! I’m old enough to make my very own decisions about especially my favorite activity, and I praise the person who invented that absolutely wonderful sport, called tennis. That’s what my whole life is based on and I’m going to keep playing my whole life because I want to be a professional tennis player! I’m going to be in the sports magazines, so look out!
The sun can’t keep shining all day long…
They say that you’ll get more to decide over when you’re a teenager, yeah right! You see, a week ago, at practice, I played against my awfully disturbing opponent, Linus, who is a terrible loser. You really can’t imagine it! He goes absolutely mad at anything and anyone who gets in his way, every time he looses a set. And last week I got the terrible news that it’s him that I’m going to train with and against the rest of the season! I seriously don’t want to keep playing tennis anymore, I hate it! I told my stupidly mean mum about it yesterday, but she won’t let me quit this ridiculous sport ever made! Doesn’t she realize that she’s ruining my life? Am I not old enough to make my own choices? at lest that was what I thought until now. Of course I’m going to tell my kids to never play tennis. At least they won’t have to make the biggest mistake of their lives… Could it be worse?
Living In London With London(pic. 3)
SvaraRaderaLondon is 3 years old and he has light brown hair and brown eyes! He lives in London with his big sister and his parents.
One time the family took a little trip down town ,they took a cab from their house to the city.
When the family got there they separated. The mother brought London with her to Harrolds and the father brought his sister to the grocery store to buy some food.
As you may know Harrold is a really big store (especially for a three year old child). During the time they were shopping London saw something interesting and ran away from his mother, she didn’t noticed because she was so concentrated on what she was doing.
After a while she turned around to se if London was there and when he wasn’t she started screaming. Everyone started to look for him but they never found the boy...
Oh Hayyp Day !
Life is wonderful especially during the summer for a little three year old. Today he is going to the beach for the first time and he is really excited about it.
When he and his family arrives it's really hot so there is a lot of people on the beach. At once he sees the ocean and laughing he starts running towards the water. He's father is right behind him and together the swim all day long !
The boy really enjoys it and when it gets dark they start up a fire and makes some marshmallows. These are the boys favorite candy.
When it's time to go home he falls asleep in the car and dreams about the best day of his life...
Living the good life
SvaraRaderaMy name is Victoria and I am 16 years old. I have dark skin and black long hair. My family is from Chile and according to me we have the perfect relationship. I have two older brothers who are 19 and 21 years old. My friends always say that I should be happy for my amazing family.
I have wonderful friends. My birthday was last week and they surprised me with a huge party just for me. All my friends were there and I had the time of my life. We were partying into the morning. It means so much that they added down the energy to fix this.
A different girl
Because of my dark skin I have been bullied my entire life. People are looking down on me and I feel like I am worth less than any other. Boys don’t like me and I’ve never been on a date. My parents always say that I am beautiful, but I don’t believe them. My brother says that I would get boyfriends when I get older, but right now they don’t understand my beauty, I can not imagine that.
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SvaraRaderaStill missing
When I think of the day for soon three years ago, it hurts. My mom says that the best thing I can do is to write it all down and don´t hold it inside of me. So, here´s my story.
My best friend at the time and I was going to a party in the house next to me. I still remember what she was wearing that night. A short blue dress and black high heels. She looked beautiful and her brown long hair was hanging free. Before we went inside the house she said to me: “Sara let´s have the greatest night in our lives tonight”.
That was the last time I saw my twin sister Amanda. Nobody knows what´s happened her that night.
The worlds greatest
I´m going to tell you about the world´s greatest sister. Her name is Amanda and you can´t do anything but love her. She has long brow hair (I´m really jealous of that), blue sparkling eyes and a dazzling smile.
Amanda has big plans for her live. Right now she´s going to the most famous school in LA and when she´s graduating she wants to travel to south Africa and work there for doctors without borders. I admire her for that.
Tonight we are going to a big party at my neighbors place. I´m really looking forward to that.
Regrets
SvaraRaderaI am always going to remember that terrible day in August last year. If I could change what happen that day, I would. I was about to drive to the supermarket to get food for the evening. It was a very nice day, the sun was shining and it was very hot. It took about ten minutes to drive from our house to the supermarket. When I drove out from our neighbor hood, my sister called me on my phone. I was so busy talking with my sister so I didn’t noticed the girl on the street. It was a terrible crash. I’m always going to remember her face. She had long brown hair, brown eyes and a beautiful smile. That day I took the life from a sixteen year old girl. I think about her and her family everyday.
My amazing friend
Our friend Sarah is sixteen years old. Sara has long brown hair, that kind of hair that every girl want to have. She has also beautiful brown eyes and a nice brown skin. For us she is an amazing friend. Her dream has always been to see Akon live, so we wanted to make her dream come true. One day we surprised her and took her to New York to see Akon live. It was a very a good night and I’m never going to forget her smile that day.