MEET BEYONCE, EMINEM, JUSTIN TIMBERLAKE AND JESSICA SIMPSON

Robert knew who he was writing about (Eminem) and perhaps Amin and Mohamed guessed the idea behind the pictures when they wrote “David Beckhams little boy” and “My memories of Jennifer Lopez” respectively. The photos you wrote your text about were taken of celebrities when they were young. I have read all of your texts, and am amazed by your writing skills! Here are quotes from your essays:

A "happily ever after" story:

Title:
"Summer kiss"

Descriptive words/phrases:
“Jessica woke up with a smile on her face – today was the day!” and “They gave Happy that name because he is always happy”. Another good example is:

He had good grades, he had a lot of potential and he was going to grow up and be somebody someday" and "destructive life style" as well as "without the support at home there wasn’t much that could catch him when he started spiralling down towards a life of drugs and crime.

The ending/conclusion

“I’m always going to remember her face. She had long brown hair, brown eyes and a beautiful smile. That day I took the life from a sixteen year old girl. I think about her and her family everyday”

A story with a bad ending:¨

Title
“If you just knew!” and “Still missing” as well as “The sun can’t keep shining all day long…”

Descriptive words/phrases:
"it makes me feel bad".

Something in between (= a contrast)
"with great success comes great enemies"

Ending:
"Everyone started to look for him but they never found the boy..." as well as these two conclusions: “Sarah was a happy seventeen with long blond hair and a smile that were breathtaking. A memory ceremony will be held the 20th of October” and “The next morning she wakes up at the hospital, and her brother is lying in the bed next to her but not her parents”.