Today your job is to describe someone else, and you have the pitures to your right to choose from. Make up a story about one of them, and write one with a happy ending (describing a happy life) and one negative story with a sad ending. Each of the stories should consist of 50- 150 words.
Chose a heading that gets the reader interested in reading your text.
Write an introduction that also gets the reader interested in readning more.
Indicate clear paragraphs.
Describe the person; what he/she looks like, how the person acts, and why. Also write about the person's life choices (that could be either good or bad...)
Write a clear conclusion/summary to your text.
Note! When you are done please look at the entries written by your class mates (last week) and comment on at least one of the texts - write one positive remark and one where you suggest an improvement.
Klassföreståndare och mentor
Er klassföreståndare Anders (till höger)
Er mentor Carolina
Small on the outside and big inside
SvaraRaderaMy name is Gaga and I go to the nursery right now. I’m 5 years old and I have blonde beautiful hair. I don’t have a friend and my biggest dream is to have a real friend. So I’ll do my best to get one.
October 1, something especially happened. I got 3$ from my dad and I was going to buy a lollipop across the street. On my way there I met a girl, a cute one. I knew that the lollipop cost 1.5$ so I asked her if she wanted a lollipop and she starred at me with big eyes and finally answered
-Yes I want.
On our way back we talked much and when she was to leave she asked about my name. I said that my name is Gaga and she smiled at me. She said that I was her best friend she ever had.
Picture 3.
I wish I was the big one
My name is Gaga and I go to the nursery right now. In my class there is a big guy who is a bully. He always bully my clothes and my parents, it makes me feel bad. I don’t even have a friend who can help me. Sometimes I just want to be like him, but I can’t, I was born like this and I’ll grow up like this... A geek...
When I came home from kindergarten, I decided to flee from home and hide from everyone. That is how my story ends...
Picture 3
Summer kiss
SvaraRaderaOne picture four you have a beautiful girl with name Sandra. She has told me about her summer and I will tell you about hers. She was in Sweden this summer and that was her best summer ever. Sandra meets a boy on the beach every day, and one day the boy asks her about a dating. She answers of course YES! She was so nervous the hold day, but when she meets him on the beach lived she in a dream. And when they parted at night, he gave her a kiss as she will never forget.
Sandy you were my favorite!
My name is Sandra and I am a very happy person but I have one thing to tell you about my dog.. I remember the day as if it were yesterday. I was maybe five years old and me and my family was outside in the garden and plays football whit our dog, suddenly the boll came outside the garden and my dog should run after. When Sandy as she was called came out on the street a care came and sat over her. I have never cried so much and I came never forget the day and my dog Sandy.
Living In London With London(pic. 3)
SvaraRaderaLondon is 3 years old and he has light brown hair and brown eyes! He lives in London with his older sister and his parents.
One time the family took a little trip down town ,they took a cab from their house because it's hard to find parking places in the city.
When the family got there they separated. The mother brought London with her to Harrolds and the father brought his sister to the grocery store to buy some food.
As you may know Harrold is a really big store (especially for a three year old child). During the time they were shopping London saw something interesting and ran away from his mother, she didn’t noticed because she was so concentrated on what she was doing.
After a while she turned around to se if London was there and when he wasn’t she started screaming. Everyone started to look for him but they never found the boy...
Oh Hayyp Day !
Life is wonderful especially during summer time for a little three year old. Today he is going to the beach for the first time and he is really excited.
When he and his family arrives it's really hot so there are a lot of people on the beach. At once he sees the ocean and laughing he starts running towards the water. He's father is right behind him and together the swim all day long !
The boy really enjoys it and when it gets dark they start up a fire and makes some marshmallows. These are the boys favorite candy.
When it's time to go home he falls asleep in the car and dreams about the best day of his life.
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SvaraRaderaWho could forget Antonio "Tony" Montana.
This boy was borned in Cuba in Castros time but he moved to the U.S. in his late 20's after he came out from prison in Cuba. His mom and sister already live in the States but they do not have any contact with each other.
The city he came to was Miami,FL at first he lived in a immigrantcamp then they gave him citizensship. Then he and his friend Manolo "Manny" started to work in a low-class restaurang.
Manny had spoked with couple of wiseguys that make money of cocaine. The wiseguys gave the both each job. The head of the gangsters was Frank Lopez and his right hand man was Omar.
Tony started to clime in the drug business with Manny as his right hand man, make alot more money, better clothes & car. But he fell in love with Franks wife Laura.
Frank wanted to kill Tony for that so he tried but failed, so Tony got back on Frank by killing him and a cop, took his wife, all of his business and hired his running boy to be bigger in the business. He climed more and more and more and started to do business in Panama and Bolivia but not in Columbia because he hates columbians. But "with grat sucess comes great enemies"
Picture 2
SvaraRaderaThe story about Superman
He had good grades, he had a lot of potential and he was going to grow up and be somebody someday.
We called him superman, but his real name was Smith Johnson. He wanted to help everybody, even people he didn’t know. He helped old ladies over the street. He played with the other children in the Neighborhood, and everybody loved him.
One day when Smith was going home from school, he saw a man robbing an old lady. So he throw his backpack on the ground and ran to help the old lady. But what he didn’t know, was that the man robbing the lady had a gun. So the man shoot Smith five times. And Smith died.
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This is an true story about an very intelligent man.
He grow up in a very poor home. He lived in a trailer from the time he was born, to the time he couldn’t take it any more.
He loved school, that was the only place he could feel safe. He was all about good grades, and he always did his homework.
When it was time to graduate, he got the opportunity to attend to Harvard. He got in and graduate from Harvard. He got perfect scores on every test, so he graduated with maximum scores. And now he has been working for a cure to AIDS, and now he is getting the nobel prize.
A life to live?
SvaraRaderaPicture 2 is Marshall Mathers (Eminem), Marshall grew up in Detroit With his mother Debbie Mathers his mother was a drug addict and made a living out of suing businesses for falls injuries she sustained wile in the store. This wasn’t a way to make ends meet and Debbie got her self evicted most off the times from various trailer parks and apartment buildings. Due to this destructive life style and constraint moving around she was living.Marshall never got to fell included in any school and he fell behind on grades and with out the support at home there wasn’t much that could catch him when he started spiraling down towards a life of drugs and crime.
Finding the music
After many rap battles and his first cd hitting the shelves in 1998 ( Eminem infinity ) and Eminem career taking of Marshall find him self with a hart field of happiness on a plane on his way to the rap Olympics in California. Where the winner will win a 10.000 dollar check and will have an aperies on the radio show. The 100k battle where some of the most famous names in hip hop have bean discovered. After winning all of the battles Eminem finds him self in the final. With a nerves filling in his gut that squeezes hold of his intestines but his head is at peace with the situation and he is staying focused on the rhymes he wrote down.
Regrets
SvaraRaderaI am always going to remember that terrible day in August last year. If I could change what happen that day, I would. I was about to drive to the supermarket to shop food for the evening. It was a very nice day, the sun was shining and it was very hot. It took about ten minutes to drive from our house to the supermarket. When I drove out from our neighbor hood, my sister called me on my phone. I was so busy talking with my sister so I didn’t noticed the girl on the street. It was a terrible crash. I’m always going to remember her face. She had long brown hair, brown eyes and a beautiful smile. That day I took the life from a sixteen year old girl. I think about her and her family everyday.
My amazing friend
Our friend Sarah is sixteen years old. She has long brown hair, that kind of hair that every girl dreams of. She has beautiful brown eyes and a nice brown skin. To us she is an amazing friend. Her dream has always been to see Akon live, so we wanted to make that dream come true. One day we surprised her and took her to see Akon live in New York, it was a very good night and I’m never going to forget her smile that day.
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SvaraRaderaThe best birthday
Amanda is 15 years old and very beautiful. She has long, blond hair and light blue eyes. She has just find out that she is going to get a dog for her birthday. It has been her dream for a very long time and finally her mum and dad have agreed that she is old enough to take care of a dog. She can’t wait for it to become Thursday, her birthday.
Leaving you behind
Amanda has just packed all her things. Her mum is jelling at her to hurry up because her dad is home soon. Amanda and her mum are going to leave her dad, he’s not good to them and he is drunk all the time. They have no idea were they are going but her mum just want to leave. Even though he’s not good to them, he is her dad and she loves him, she now her mum loves him too but they just can’t live together. When they get in the cab, she can see her dad walk in to the house. This maybe is the last time she sees him and she starts to cry.
The sad ending of Sarah parker! (pic 4)
SvaraRaderaSarah was one of many students on South Carolina` high school. She was one of the top students and was liked by all. That’s way it came like a big chock when Sarah’s live ended in a big tragedy. It was after school and Sarah was walking home when an aggressive unknown robber came and demanded all of her cash. Nobody knows why he shoot her after he was done. Sarah died in the ambulance on the why to the hospital. Sarah was a happy seventeen with long blond hair and a smile that where breathtaking. A memory ceremony will be hold the twenty October .
About Sally!
SvaraRaderaMy name is Sally and I am fifteen years old. I live in New York with my parents, my two big brothers and our dog in a giant house. I am short, have black medium long hair and big brown eyes. I started studying in high school this year and I like it there. In my spare time I take dance lessons. The dancing is a big part of my life, I really love it. When I dance I feel like I am my self and no one can stop me. Next month me and my dance group are going to have a performance for friends and family. Until then we will train every single day. I hope it will succeed.
That terrible crash!
Sally hade a really good life until that terrible day when she and her family where in a car crash. It was her mother, father and her brother that was out on the road that cold winter night. There where ice on the road so the car slide into the ditch. Sally felt how the blood flows down from her dark hair, she can not longer keep her big brown eyes open. The next morning she wakes up at the hospital, her brother is lying on the bed next to her but not her parents.
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David Beckhams little boy
SvaraRaderaHe was one of the riches children in the school or (the riches) because his dad was David Beckham the football player in England. I was very happy to being friend or not any friends I was his best fiend. The girls liked him a lot. Me and him played football every day with his dad. His dad learned me a lot about football so if you think? (How much did he learn his own boy)? He is going to be just like his father. The boys name was Brooklyn Joseph Beckham he was white and brown hair and short maybe like me. And this is the boys picture its picture number 2.
Child who deserve a better life
I will talk about a little child who lived poor all his childhood. He didn’t buy what he wants. He had almost the same clothes all the time in the preschool he wasn’t strong either every boy and girl hated him because he hadn’t the money to buy some clothes buy he didn’t want to say to any one that he was poor, because he thought that the teachers and the principal will give him a little money but he was the kind of kids who didn’t care about how they look like so he hold it like a secret so no body can care about his miserable life. He met a little child (girl) they loved each others and when they became big they got marred and in a few years they got a child but because they didn’t have money to raise him so they putted him in a orphanage and they visited him every month just to say hi to him. And this was about the children number 3 who didn’t live the write life.
Just a normal girl! :)
SvaraRaderaCristen is a girl with long blond hair brown eyes and she has a beautiful smiley, just like her wonderful look.
She´s 15 years old and live home with both of her parents , her little sister Linda and there
dog Happy. They gave Happy that name because he is always happy.
Cristin is a very good person. She can be mad sometimes on maybe small things ,
but we all get that sometimes. Anyway she is just like her mother , when she was in Cristins age
she had long blond hair to and she was a good person. So Cristin is all just like her mother.
On her spairtime she likes to hang out with her friend and she plays piano to. She started to play piano when she was 6 years old and she is very good at it. :)
That´s whas a little story about a girl name Cristin (:
If you just knew!
The girls name on the picture is Lisa. She has dark eyes and long hair.
The picture was taken two years ago. And on the picture she looks very happy ,
as you can se. But is she really that now?
Lisa is 18 now and she has canser. It´s a horrible thing for a girl who is 18 years old.
She is so young. Her grandmother had canser ones but she made it all true it and she´s
alive but the doctors told Lisa that nothing looks good. The canser has spread over to almost all
her body. So there is not so much to do actually.
Lisa hate to think about the canser. Because she know that she aren´t going to make it, she´s going
to leave her family her friends and everyone…four good...
Picture 4 Still missing
SvaraRaderaWhen I think of the day for soon three years ago, it hurts. My mom says that the best thing I can do is to write it all down and don´t hold it inside of me. So, here´s my story.
My best friend at the time and I was going to a party in the house next to me. I still remember what she was wearing that night. A short blue dress and black high heels. She looked beautiful and her brown long hair was hanging free. Before we went inside the house she said to me: “Sara let´s have the greatest night in our lives tonight”.
That was the last time I saw my twin sister Amanda. Nobody knows what´s happened her that night.
The worlds greatest
I´m going to tell you about the world´s greatest sister. Her name is Amanda and you cant do anything but love her. She has long brow hair (I´m really jealous of that), blue sparkling eyes and a dazzling smile.
Amanda have big plans for her lives. Right now she´s going to the most famous school in LA and when she´s graduating she wants to travel to south Africa and work there for doctors without borders. I admire her for that.
Tonight we are going to a big party of my neighbors. I really looking forward to that.
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SvaraRaderaI want to live like this forever, free and with no demands, however!
Hi guys! I just have to tell you that I’ve got the absolutely most boring, none interesting, name ever! My lovely parents made de awfully bad choice of giving me the name Carl. Seriously, why couldn’t they choose a name like Patric? But I can always change my name when I’m older, luckily. You know, I’ve just had my 13th birthday, and I’m so stupidly proud of not being a child anymore. Do you realize it? I’m a teenager for heavens sake! I’m old enough to make my very own decisions about especially my favorite activity, and I praise the person who invented that absolutely wonderful sport, called tennis. That’s what my whole life is based on and I’m going to keep playing my whole life because I want to be a professional tennis player! I’m going to be in the sports magazines so look out!
The sun can’t keep shining all day long…
They say that you will have more to decide over when you’re a teenager, yeah right! You see, a week ago, at practice, I played against my awfully disturbing opponent, Linus, who is a terrible loser. You really can’t imagine it! He goes absolutely mad at anything and anyone who gets in his way, every time he looses a set. And last week I got the terrible news that it’s him that I’m going to train with and against the rest of the season! I seriously don’t want to keep playing tennis anymore, I hate it! I told my stupidly mean mum about it yesterday, but she won’t let me quit this ridiculous sport ever made! Doesn’t she realize that she’s going to ruin my life? Am I not old enough to make my own choices, at lest that was what I thought until now. I’m going to tell my kids to not play tennis ever, at least they don’t need to make the biggest mistake of their lives… Please, cheer me up!
Emma Grönvall
SvaraRaderaPicture 1:
Elisabeth lives a very happy life with her parents in a small town in USA. If I would ask her what she thinks about her life, I think that she would answer that her life is as perfect as it could be.
She got lots of friends, is popular in school, is very good looking, kind
Elisabeth got long light brown hair, brown eyes and she is quite long, kind and happy all the time, so therefore she makes everyone happy too.
Picture 1:
The girl on the picture looks very happy just like her life is perfect but behind the smile on her face she is hiding something…
Her name is Amy and she lives with her mother and stepfather, because her real father died in cancer when she was a little girl. She was totally crossed when her father died and she misses him very much.
Then after a while her mother found a new man, but Amy doesn´t like him at all.
Everyday when she comes home from school he takes her to his room and he hits her and she gets big bruise and her mom doesn’t do anything because they are very poor and got no where else to live so she can´t leave him.
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SvaraRaderaMy memories of Jennifer Lopez.
SvaraRaderaJennifer Lopez was the love of my life, but she disappeared from the earth for 3 years ago.
We were going to a party one day, we drank in the car and had fun. But the problem is that Jennifer was to drunk when we left the car. She fell and cried many times. I took care of her, but 3 gangsters came to us and threatened us. One of them took up a pistol and shot Jennifer. They ran away and the ambulance came to us very fast. Before they took Jennifer, I kissed her in the mouth and said ‘’Good Luck’’
But an hour later I heard Jennifer died. I couldn’t believe it. I get angry everytime when I remember it.
My best memory of her is when I saw her in a party. She were very beautiful and looked at me every time. I was shy, but I went to her. We were dancing and then she took my hands. We looked at each other, then we kissed.
After a couple weeks, she was my girlfriend.
We all remember Jennifer Lopez, who’s in heaven right now.
STORY 1: Picture 1:
SvaraRaderaBetween Mexico and United States is a big city called Tijuana. Its one of the worlds most dangerous place. Weapons are in every mans pockets and drugs are controlling the hole city. About 15 persons die every day thanks to the drugs.
Ones there was born a girl on that city that changed all. She always had a nice smile and the people new that she was special from the moment they saw her. Just ass a ten year old she became a powerful person in Tijuana. The people in Tijuana saw her as their Gud but she didn’t want to be ther Gud, she used to say: - I´m a human just like you all, and that means you can all be like me.
She became more and more power full and when she became 25 she was the president of Mexico. The people round the hole world started to think as her. Revolutions against the old system began to happen all the time everywhere. She became history.
Year 2083 the smile despaired and she died but she had made her goal. The hole world became a peace full planet thanks to a hole normal human.
The happy event in Rachel Stinsons life! (pic4)
SvaraRaderaRachel stinson is the winner in the compation "met Usain bolt". To win you had to say why you want to meet Usain bolt. Rachel wrote " I am a fiftenn year old girl and i have never ever seen any famous person so to be able to speak with Usain bolt would relly be something i can say to my freinds. But thats not all I am a very sportisch girl and my dream is that i one day can be in the olympic and take gold in long jump so i hope he as any tip he can give me. Thanks beforehand"
Rachel will met Usain the 25 october we relly hope it will be a meting she wont forget.
From the new york times
A perfect day
SvaraRaderaIt was a beautiful and warm Friday morning in May. The birds were singing loudly and there wasn´t a cloud on the sky. Jessica woke up with a smile on her face – today was the day! She still couldn´t believe that Ryan, the cutest guy in the school, had asked her out. They had decided that they would go to Starbucks and drink coffee right after school.
Just before Jessica was on her way out, she looked a last time in the mirror. This morning she had curled her long brown hair and putted on some blue eye shadow. The blue really matched her green eyes well. Standing there in her school uniform she established that she looked very good. Jessica hugged her mother goodbye and went through the door. This was going to be a perfect day.
The beginning of a terrible day
Today was supposed to be my daughter Jessica´s 18-birthday. Even though it has gone one year, I still can´t understand that she´s gone.
I remember it like it was yesterday. I was cleaning the kitchen when the newscaster on the TV in the living room told about a shooting on a school in England. 15 people had died. I couldn´t hear everything of what the newscaster was saying, so I went in to the living room. The feeling that I’ve got when I saw Jessica´s school on the TV, is indescribable. Somewhere I knew that Jessica was one of the students who had died. I could feel it in my stomach. Quickly I grab my car keys and ran out through the door. This was the beginning of a terrible day.
Living the good life
SvaraRaderaMy name is Victoria and I am 16 years old. I have dark skin and dark hair. My family is from Chile and according to me we have a perfect relationship. I have two older brothers who are 19 and 21 years old. My friends always tell me that I should be happy for my amazing family.
I have wonderful friends. My birthday was last week and they surprised me with a party just for me. All my friends and the people I know were there and I have the time of my life. We were partying into the morning. It means so much that they cares so much about me that added down the energy to fix this.
A different girl
Because of my dark skin I have been bullied my entire life. People are looking down on me and I feel like I am worth less than any other. Boys don’t like me and I have never been on a date. My parents always tell me that I am beautiful but I don’t believe them. My brother has a girlfriend right now and he is popular with the girls. He says that I would get boyfriends when I get older but right now they don’t understand my beauty but I can not imagine it.
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SvaraRaderaWe all remember Catelynn (sad story)
Sadly our friend Cate died 4 years ago.
When I answered my phone that evening in July, and the only thing I heard was a crying woman, I realized that something terrible had happened.
When I got the sad news my feelings for everything were destroyed. My life started to go off track and I couldn’t go to school in a very long time. I missed her so much and it wasn’t going in the right direction. Everyone around me was very worried about me.
I mean that they don’t know at all what I was going true. She was my best friend. We have known each other since we started to cry.
She died because of her illness, when she got the tests and result that she had a seriously illness we all knew that she hadn’t many years left. But we didn’t think about it so much then. So when she died it was a big chock.
My best friend Catelynn (god story)
We were the to girls in the world that had the happiest friendship. We have never had a fight. We have known each other since we were small. Our parents know each other and that’s were our friendship started. I liked her very much, and I still love her. I will never forget her. She had the most friendly personality and was very caring.
Made by Malin
Take a turn.
SvaraRaderaAllison begins her day like she always does, but what she don´t know is that her day is going to take a big turn when she lest expect it.
Allison is sitting in her room combing her long braun hair. She is about to go too school.
Five minutes later she walks out through the door, she walks down the entrance and she se a black car. When she walks at the sidewalk she se the black car fallowing her, the car drives faster and faster at her, it stops next to her and two men gets out and drags her in the car.
No one have seen her since.
Long week.
Allison is not so tall, a bit skinny but she don´t mind and she has long braun hair.
She´s on her way to school, she´s happy because it´s Friday and tomorrow it´s Saturday the day she has been longed for the hole week. Tomorrow she´s going to San Francisco there boyfriend lives, and she haven´t seen him for three weeks.
She got to her boyfriend safe and sound in the afternoon.
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I like Ernestos entry because it feel real, and when you read it you can visualize how it could happen. So I enjoyed reading his entry.
SvaraRaderaPers entry was a good read to, and some day I want to meet Usain bolt to. And I want to meet the girl to.
I think Matilda had a nice title and she had a griping start on the entry.